Thursday, May 27, 2010

Snippet of my work1

This is just a little something I'm working on. Let me know what you think so far please. It's just a few parts of a poem that's been in the works for a while now.

... my heart races against time and butterflies, they fill my insides. I go deaf but i can hear the language of your body almost allowing it to serenade me into a daydream...

... as you look into my eyes they are telling you my thoughts and displaying my desires, preventing us from denying this inextinguishable fire

.... pulling me in closer to inject me with the kiss of the eclipse as the sun and moon slow dance, displaying an undeniably sweet romance...

4 comments:

  1. I like that alot....U have to give us more and stop teasing!

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  2. Love it! I agree, give us more!!

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  3. I like it. Especially the part " go deaf but i can hear the language of your body "

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